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Adrift and at Peace
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Your quietest whispers drift to me
Like a softened mist over the water

All of your truths hidden deep in your eyes
Swirled in beauty like sands in the current

Pulling away then rushing back to my side
In the ebb and flow of ceaseless tide

The waves pull me away from you
Yet this time I don't fight back

Adrift and at peace
In my river of tears

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Cropped and framed in Photoshop.
Natural colours, reflection, etc.

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Peace.

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:iconmi4:
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simple yet beautiful. the colours are stunning and as i previously said, it must have been a really beautiful day at a beautiful location . good work !

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:iconpixel-dirt:
oh wow, i love the colors of the water... it's so smooth and soft... if the duck wasn't there i would swear it was a painting...

great work...

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:iconconst:
Great job! :) Amazing colors and composition. Very relaxing.
:iconm-i-s-a:
wow! it's really great job, perfect colors! it has a pure beauty, so cheerful i think; well done congratualtions... :thumbsup:
:iconmadsick:
the colors are wonderful... the water is so clear .. great photo
:iconsuzums:
very simple composition, but the colors are beautiful!
the smoothness of the water is amazing!

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:iconnyctophobia:
i love ducks. wait, it is a duck.. right?

lovely shot.
:iconkyvek:
Nice :) beautiful colors man.

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This is just pleasure for eyes.
So sharp, focused, blue, gradient and... did I mention focused?

okay it's official, hesi likes pictures that are sharp and in focus.
And it's ironic 'cause my 300D wouldn't give me that. :(

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Your poem is great. I don't see anything wrong with it, it's simple and to the point. No guessing games as to its meaning, it's pretty well obvious.

But your picture MORE than overshadows the poem I'd have to say... awesome beauty, I adore it.

May I have your permission to draw and color it, and post it on Devart with links/reference to you?

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My boyfriend is like Apollo, when he smiles it makes the sun come up.

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March 14, 2004
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Mar 14, 2004, 4:35:23 PM

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